Rachel’s Challenge #4 (acersecomic)

Dear Sammy

By Rachel Hoge

We’re your biggest supporters.

No, really.

 

While the other Philistines struck

your body and wept for

the temple—

or rather, the smoky ash

that remains

 

we were holding signs

campaigning for resurrection

knowing full well that you were innocent

before you met her.

 

Can you believe that

they tore your clothes

and slit your skin

like you were somehow to blame?

 

I’m telling you now

we would’ve stayed there all night

standing in the ashes, keeping watch.

 

But then your family came to bury you

inside that temple in Zorah.

Your dad said it was nice—

your god must have some clout

in life after death.

 

After that, we went home

to light a candle on the mantle.

We said a prayer to Dagon for you

just in case Yahweh wasn’t happy—

which you told us once at dinner

was often the case.

 

That night we told stories

like that time you fought lions

with your bare hands

or killed that army

with just a donkey bone.

 

Delilah cried through every one—

especially when she told us

about the night she

held the knife

to your acersecomic head

and made it naked and bald.

 

All those nights the four of us

sat around the fire

imagining your lives

with marriage and sons.

 

Delilah says they were for nothing,

but we think that she’s wrong.

 

We’ll write you again soon.

 

Miss you, kid,

D’s Mom and Dad

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One Response to Rachel’s Challenge #4 (acersecomic)

  1. Joel B.

    This is amazing Rach, keep em coming!

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